When I left My Country - by Eria
When I was 15 years old I had to leave my country. My name is Andrew and this is my story from how I became a refugee.
One dark and stormy night my parents woke me up and said to get a plastic bag and get canned food when I was getting food I heard a explotion. I got scared and we ran away to a refugee camp. It was scary seeing machine guns around the walls of the camp. I was crying seeing people die on the way here. I wanted to run away because I knew no one. I used to live in Iraq then we went to NZ.
It was hard learning english and playing with other kids again. I was really nervous going back to college.
i love that story its not to long and its just a great story.
ReplyDeleteHi its Fergus i really like the ending part. I have been learning about refugees to. It's an amazing story.
ReplyDeleteHi Eria! I like how you sectioned your story into paragraphs. Maybe you could extend the story a bit longer.I also wrote a story about refugees. Bye!
ReplyDeleteHi Eria! it's Leon I really like your story I like all the words that you used this story is so good!
ReplyDeleteKia ora Eria,
ReplyDeleteIts me Carys. I really like the bit that you said that you are nervous to go to college again. Remember to spell words correctly next time.
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ReplyDeleteHi Eria
ReplyDeleteI like your story. But It would even beater if you added what you did when you were walking.
Hi Eria I like your story I think it was really good.
ReplyDeleteHi Eria, your story was just right.It was easy to read and not too long.
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